KatIvory

Guest Judge Comments on:
KatIvory's
Perfect

6 point(s) for Composition / Songwriting
Nice hook and melody, but nothing out of the ordinary.

7 point(s) for Performance
Very well delivered, the freestyle, scatting at the end is wonderful. The rock guitar sounds out of place.

6 point(s) for Capture
Some nice spacey production effects, but the whole lacks a little oomph, it's not entirely tied together.


19 Total Points
Keep working, there's good basic talent here.


joecushley
Sat Dec 26 16:53:26 2009

Guest Judge Comments on:
KatIvory's
Perfect

4 point(s) for Composition / Songwriting
Verses etc are good.

Oh Dog, now I'm gonna do that stupid A&R thing again: The chorus isn't strong enough!
phew, I've done it. It feels terrible. It's not a bad chorus but maybe not quite cutting it.
Of course I can totally see a bunch of your mates rockin out and singing along to the track at a house party and you going: See!!!

7 point(s) for Performance
Good voice. I like the low timbre.
I like the solo synths in instrumental

4 point(s) for Capture
Rhythm track sounds a bit stressful. But probably only because the vocals are a bit laid-back. If they were edited to be bang on, it would probably be alright.


15 Total Points
The thing I like most here is the voice. Kat looks good too. I would say get some photos done and have fun with that, but the lo res neutral looking phone pic might be a good idea cause A&R like to get creative with image etc. This photo gives them space to be that.


alexmcgowan
Sat Dec 26 16:53:25 2009

Guest Judge Comments on:
KatIvory's
Perfect

8 point(s) for Composition / Songwriting
More of an RnB, pop, style. Accomplished vocal with an interesting storyline.

6 point(s) for Performance
Interesting mix of rock guitars in there. The singing is of a high standard.

6 point(s) for Capture
I’d like to see this with a big Beyonce style production as some of the background instrumentation sounds a bit thin. Might need a bit more of a climax at the end.
To these ears it needs another mix


20 Total Points
Keep the faith - your vocals definitely shine through


patfulgoni
Sat Dec 26 16:53:27 2009